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  1. #1 Writing Wisdom Passage I wrote 
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    I have a Creative Writing class, and I wrote this. It pretty much blew the class away because it was a limited 5-10 minutes of writing for it was a warm up.

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    "A few days ago I walked along the edge of the lake and was treated to the crunch and rustle of leaves with each step I made. The acoustics of this season are different and all sounds, no matter how hushed, are as crisp as autumn air" -Eric Sloane

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    ::..:: "The quote reminds me of an autumn morning where all the leaves are orange and dry, so that when stepped on or disturbed they make a crisp crunching sound. Every season and its sounds are different, like spring is the birds singing, summer is the splash and laughter of summer vacation, and winter is the soft silence of death and rebirth of spring and life again. Autumn is only a crunch and russle for food and shelter for up coming winter."

    ::..:: "Every season has its sounds, and when you stop and listen there is a hidden beauty to it that gets lost in the hustle and bussle of our lives. School, work, and more get you in a rush so much that you completely miss it"

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    Quote Originally Posted by MuffinlyBliss View Post
    It pretty much blew the class away
    Some people are easily impressed.
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    nice, I liked it.
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    Does anyone have a tissue :'( J/k

    Nice, i love doing creative writing in school, not that i succeed....


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    Thank you for your comments. I just wanted to share it since I got a good reaction from it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by MuffinlyBliss View Post
    Thank you for your comments. I just wanted to share it since I got a good reaction from it.
    I know what that feeling's like. Don't mind Andycat, some people just don't understand.
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    *Shrug* Andycat has the right to her opinion, I didn't find offense to her comment. Its her opinion.
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    Quote Originally Posted by MuffinlyBliss View Post
    *Shrug* Andycat has the right to her opinion, I didn't find offense to her comment. Its her opinion.
    Lol. If im right, AndyCat is a dude.

    +1 for MuffinlyBliss Rofl


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    Quote Originally Posted by Andromeda View Post
    Lol. If im right, AndyCat is a dude.

    +1 for MuffinlyBliss Rofl
    ...Um...err...SORRY ANDYCAT!
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    It's beautiful. Very impressive.


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    Thank you Mugen ^_^
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    No prob! I know fantastic work when I see it.
    Last edited by Mugen_NeS; 08-11-2008 at 03:48 AM. Reason: changed smiley


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