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  1. #1 Out For Revenge 
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    im going to post this chapter by chapter cause its 15 pages long in my english book lol

    Chapter 1

    1996 7th grade 6:45 pm

    The boy stands there palms sweaty holding the handle shaking with fear pointed outwards . " Do it , please do it ....... please just do it ...... JUST SHOOT THE FUCKING GUN " he shouts , " " But I dont want to sho ...... " " SHOOT THE MOTHER FUCKING GUN " . The boy got a fright and put pressure on the trigger , slowly clicking back further and with a whimper put full pressure on the trigger , the by watched as his friend dropped to the floor bleeding from the head . The boy cryed out due to the force of the gun breaking his fingers , he saw his friend on the floor and he knew the deed was done .......

    Chapter 2

    1999 10th grade 2:54 pm

    Class 10r sit in the scorching heat as the sun rays gleam through the windows , there sweaty hands tight on the backpacks just waiting there for the clock to hit 3pm . The bell sounds and the class bail to the nearest exits . It was summer break , heaven for the jocks , skaters , preps and even the geeks . Everyone loved summer break with an exception of Simon , Simon waited for 10 minutes after everyone else hoping he could avoid tre . Tre was a jock the guy every boy wanted to be , the guy every girl wanted to call there boyfriend . Tre was a jock , a jock with a grudge , a grudge against simon . Simon stood up and left the classroom and he entered the hallway leading to the exit , as he got closer to the door a shadow approched the door and in walks tre and his tag along jock friends alex and clyde . Tre`s eyes met simon`s , Tre simply smiled and said " emo beatings for all emo`s " . Simon turned around and started to run towards the back exit leading to th football field . Simon was running as fast as he could the blood was pumping and the andrenalin had taken over his body . " The longer we run the more we beat you " Shouted alex . Simon turned around and saw that only alex was chasing , he knew alex was the slowest so he started to sprint faster . As he turned the corner leading to the football field he made a last break for it . Simon busted through the door and smiled as he saw his bike . he made a last dash for it and to his surprise felt himself get taken from the side . Simon banged his head on a nearby rock and went dazed . When he opened his eyes Tre and the jockswhere standing over him , " thought you where getting away emo ?" . Tre kicked simon and knelt down on his chest and started to punch him in the face " HEY , GET THE HELL OF THAT KID " shouted somebody . it was mr williams the school gym teacher . Rumours where that he had killed two guys barehandedly for raping a college girl during his university years . " what where you doing tre " questioned mr williams . " nothing just playing " said tre , " where these guys playing kid " asked mr williams to simon . simon never replied he just got up grabbed his bike and rode away as fast as he could .
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  2. #2 Out For Revenge 
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    Damn....that is dark....
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    emo stories! w00t!
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    Ok..
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    it is actually an emo story lol
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    i <3 emo stories. so much pain and stuff....its awesome!
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    Yea.....
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  8. #8 Out For Revenge 
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    WILL YOU SUCKAS RATE IT ?
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    oh, yeah...11/10. now FINISH THE DAMN STORY!
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  10. #10 Out For Revenge 
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    i finished it like a month ago

    its 15 pages long so it takes hours to type it lol
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  11. #11 Out For Revenge 
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    scan it in and link it to us like a picture then
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  12. #12 Out For Revenge 
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    nah dont worry ill type it out this weekend

    i got important exams so im revising
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  13. #13 Out For Revenge 
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    t'is ze end of ze week. NOE WHERE IS ZE REZT OF ZE STORE ?!
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  14. #14 Out For Revenge 
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    i really cant be bothered posting it

    just like you cant be bothered finding them pics
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  15. #15 Out For Revenge 
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    .....i want ze storey! i vill find ze pics if you post ze storey.
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